Denied Ozhin's 2nd EP app

[Ozhin35 0]

Steam Name + Profile link: Ozhin_35 https://steamcommunity.com/profiles/76561199447353285/

Roleplay Name (e.g. GM TRP Johan / Jedi Padawan Ngannou): 104th SGTM Ozhin

Teamspeak Name: Ozhin

Playtime on the Server: 1mo 2d 12h 40m

SteamID (http://steamidfinder.com/): STEAM_0:1:743543778

Any experience in staffing on a roleplay server: Yes as a EP

Current Age: 17

Warns/Bans (Screenshot required):  
http://Screenshot 2024-04-25 151722
Do you have a working microphone and is it understandable?: Yes I do

Have you ever hosted an event before?: Yes

What was your event and was it successfully executed?: Yes

Do you understand the responsibilities an event-planner has? If so, what are they?: Yes I do

Do you understand at the beginning of passing the application stage, you will have to undergo a training phase until completely trusted to create and host events?: Yes I understand
 

Clone Event Plan: 
Create an event plan for Clones, Event announcement, What type of enemies will be encountered. Keep in mind this will be used for your first training event. Make it easy to understand, be original and be creative(Use the Template):

 

Story for your event:  A researcher base full of the top scientists of the G.A.R has been ambushed by pirates and get taken hostage and the confidential data on the experiments that they did to help the clones, but before all the scientists were captured one of the scientist was able to send off a S.O.S to the G.A.R HQ but the pirate intercepted the beacon and they set up an FOB to prepare for the republic forces to arrive, but before the republic arrives the pirates tries to sell the data to the CIS which makes this mission critical for G.A.R

 

Event Announcement for your story: Attention!! Pirates have token over a Republic Research base and has token hostages, SO the G.A.R orders you to go take back the base because it holds confidential data that the pirates are trying to sell to the CIS, It up to you to answer the call and join forces to take back the base and to stop the pirates

 

Choice of map: Vanqor 35 mins+

 

Type of enemies/faction, Why them in particular?:
Enemies: Pirates 
Reason: Because I feel like pirate are prone to do take over republic bases
Additional Characters:
scientist, maybe pirate capitan

Republic's outline and execution:
 Outline: Battalion gets informed by HQ to go to Vanqor to take back the Republic research base before the take and sell the data
Execution: The Battalion and any troops that are there attack the FOB that the pirates have setup and push them to the bunk where the Research base is located at and then capture or kill and remaining pirates that are alive and find one scientist that is still alive and take the data( if the data isn't already transferred) and the scientist back to the LZ 
Event Character outline and execution:
Outline: The pirates get told by the pirate Capitan to set up defenses at the FOB

Execution: prepare for the republic forces that are about to come, the pirates are supposed to hold as long they can, Once they are push out they move over to the bunker and setup defenses their and then they try transferring the data to the CIS, So the pirates are supposed to hold off the republic using any equipment at their disposal while the data transfer is going on 

[Ravolta 60]

+1/Neutral

Has been EP before

Good story

Good Playtime

Event Plan might lead to a relatively short event. From reading it, it feels like this wont fill the 35 minutes requirment without frustration on the clones side.

Some missing parts in the application (I.e. Responsibilities of an EP)

Low IC rank at the time

Edited April 28 by Ravolta

[Breatoking 72]

Denied
After careful consideration within Event Management and the Senior EP team, unfortunately we must turn down your application at this time

You may reapply in 2 weeks or once apps are open again (If they are close)