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Kaneki Frost - O5 Council

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Kaneki Fujimoto    106

Kaneki Fujimoto
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Amazing... let's attempt again shall I.
____________________________________________________________________________________
Your in-Game Name:

Kaneki Frost

Your SteamID:


 STEAM_0:1:229303029

Your Age:

15 years of age. 
(Nearing 16.)

Your In-Game Playtime:

7 weeks and 4 days. Counting.

Your Warns: 

Metagaming, job abuse and revenge RDM. (In one warning.)

 

Rate Your RP Skills:

 8/10.
(I have given myself this number due to me actually being able to RP, but on the server you may or may not notice due to my open funloving and sociable personality.)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 

 

What O5 Designation would you prefer (1-12) and what character?: 

"The Constant" -
" Male, British Decent. Appears young, but their age is mid 50's.
^ Varies appearances, but always appears in a Suit.
Speaks Calmly, and is mostly a nice individual.
(Former Ethics Committee Member.)

Have you read and understand the rules of SCP-RP?: Due to being Staff, I am aware of the current server rules. So Yes.

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Why do you believe you should be part of the O5 Council and what can you bring to the role e.g (Pressure in extreme situations, making the tough decisions):
 I highly believe that I am an encouraged individual, and able to come up with greater and brighter ideas for the Council, it can allow me to have conversations with other fellow Council Members, and see their sides of certain stories, and or situations. I see that the Council can be serious at the time, and I believe a friendly, serious and dedicated member would bring stability and diversity and variety to the Council, which will be favourable.

Working under pressure and staying calm is ideal for an O5 Council Member. I believe bringing a new role to the Council will be pleasing to have. And I believe I will be able to serve. All O5 Council Members personally all have their own judgement on their own things, one may get angry and shoot, yet another may lock them up. The new role I wish to bring is patience, calmness and determination. Of course there are many more reasons, but I believe bring a diverse member of the Council will be exactly right for the council, to open a new mindset for them, and making things go way one way or another, either with violence, or ethically.

Regarding all this, let's go back to the main question: I wish to bring a new experience and a new fresh role to the Group, making disscussions with council colleagues and able to come to the answer of certain questions much faster and efficiently, open a new mindset for myself and my colleagues to new experiences oppertunites, and of course to show absolute determination & to assist my colleagues with needs, and as most importantly, be professional, and upkeep a good posture on the job. With all that being said, I believe bringing this role to the council will be a good choice to keep in mind.



 

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I personally have served in Alpha-1 for quite some time, and through out that time, I was able to show patience, and being able to work under pressure. Alpha-1 is the MTF in closest contact with the O5 Council, seeing the little things of what the O5 Council does. My vast experience in MTF E-11 has also proved beneficial, teaching me to keep eyes all around me, staying on high alert during breaches, working harmoniously together, to secure the area, and getting personnel to safety during extensive breaches.


 

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I believe that I am a mature individual, taking my staff position as an example, I have shown the ability to work under pressure and keeping the things running smoothly, this paid off beautifully as I have shown my ability to be working as Site Administration. Administrative personnel are to be taken seriously, take The Site Director, I've served as Site Director for a high period of time, learning to give out orders, and maintaining harmony through the site. I've recently joined the Ethics Committee, seeing an entire new view of an administrative member, I've learned surprisingly at a high speed and I believe I've shown my abilities and predilection on the field and roles as of such, and I believe I can bring a new perspective to the O5 Council. 


Can you explain what an O5 does for the foundation and the site itself and why he himself differs from any other site Adminstration?: 
The O5 Council are the highest ranking foundation personnel on the site/ the owners of the Foundation thus makes them differ from other Site Administration;

Other Site-Administration sometimes attend or notify the personnel if they have arrived on-site, I've seen this happen a few times with a simple "SD on-site" or "ECM on-site." Preferably an O5 Council Member, would choose to stay unidentified, and not notify anyone of their presence to prevent any bad event from happening. -  The CL2 personnel are unaware of their existance, and The Council would like to keep it that way.

What may differ too, are the secretive MTF Operatives that follow the Council Members, and provide them with a layer of protection with their Assault Rifles and absolute dedication to protecting the Council.
Who may this be?: MTF Alpha-1.

Mobile Task Force Alpha-1, appropriately nicknamed the Red Right Hand, are the protectors and guardians of the Notorious and inaccessible O5 Council. These are the best of the best, handpicked for both skill and absolute loyalty to the Council. They work with an extra layer of secrecy and accept their orders directly from O5. Seemingly the O5 Council are able to grant any sort of request at their will, but they will mostly deny requests depending what this could be.


--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
What is the O5 Council?
The O5 Council, are the highest members and top leaders in the Foundation. It consists of 12 Council Members and sometimes an additional member to break up ties in votes. The members of the Council have to work together to make the right decision at the right time. Varying from money and budgets, to certain projects that are active within the site, and overseeing the foundation and the staff that are located within. Most members don't do the everyday thankless tasks of course they give orders down the Chain of Command to the simple researcher and security guard. They too have limits though from a higher power that they and a spare few others know of.

 Like a lot of secret organizations, the Foundation goes to great lenghts to make sure their forbidden knowledge remains secret, that's why low level junior researchers, guards, and janitorial staff aren't privy to where all the bodies are buried - both literally and metaphorically speaking. The O5 are a group of 12 or 13people, usually named "The Overseers" or "The Overwatch" etc.

The Foundation has five levels of security clearance, and the O5 Council and their select staff are the only ones who are at Security Level 5 - also known as "Thaumiel Clearance." O5 Council members are also considered Class-A Foundation Staff; meaning they are of critical value to the operations of the Foundation.

As such, they're not permited to interact with any anomalies for fear, corruption, alteration or death. Though of course seeing as they're the most powerful people in the Foundation, they don't always follow their own rules on this one. In the event of an emergency their evacuation and transportation to a designated Safe Zone becomes a top priority to all Foundation underlings. They rarley, if ever, interact with the majority of the Foundation instead favoring to use a vast network of messengers and go-betweens for security purposes. 
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________________________________________________________________________________________

Are you currently head of a department (Job Manager), general staff in Nu-7 or a Site Director?:
I am currently serving as a Site Director.

What Departement would you like to focus on? (Research, Mobile Task Forces, Ethics,...):
I personally wouldn't mind any, yet we could discuss this; Ethics is one of my ideas.


Thank you for reading.
I will appreciate honest and serious feedback, that will be amazing.
(Any changes or little "hard-to-read" parts you want to see feel free to notify me.)

- Kaneki Frost
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NOTE: You may find similair sections to my other applications. I added them here and added more different sections/information.

 

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Johnwickisblak    226

Johnwickisblak
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4 hours ago, Kaneki Frost said:
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Amazing... let's attempt again shall I.
____________________________________________________________________________________
Your in-Game Name:

Kaneki Frost

Your SteamID:


 STEAM_0:1:229303029

Your Age:

15 years of age. 
(Nearing 16.)

Your In-Game Playtime:

7 weeks and 4 days. Counting.

Your Warns: 

Metagaming, job abuse and revenge RDM. (In one warning.)

 

Rate Your RP Skills:

 8/10.
(I have given myself this number due to me actually being able to RP, but on the server you may or may not notice due to my open funloving and sociable personality.)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 

 

What O5 Designation would you prefer (1-12) and what character?: 
-snip-

---------------------------------------
Why do you believe you should be part of the O5 Council and what can you bring to the role e.g (Pressure in extreme situations, making the tough decisions):
 I highly believe that I am an encouraged individual, and able to come up with greater and brighter ideas for the Council, it can allow me to have conversations with other fellow Council Members, and see their sides of certain stories, and or situations. I see that the Council can be serious at the time, and I believe a friendly, serious and dedicated member would bring stability and diversity and variety to the Council, which will be favourable.

Working under pressure and staying calm is ideal for an O5 Council Member. I believe bringing a new role to the Council will be pleasing to have. And I believe I will be able to serve. All O5 Council Members personally all have their own judgement on their own things, one may get angry and shoot, yet another may lock them up. The new role I wish to bring is patience, calmness and determination. Of course there are many more reasons, but I believe bring a diverse member of the Council will be exactly right for the council, to open a new mindset for them, and making things go way one way or another, either with violence, or ethically.

Regarding all this, let's go back to the main question: I wish to bring a new experience and a new fresh role to the Group, making disscussions with council colleagues and able to come to the answer of certain questions much faster and efficiently, open a new mindset for myself and my colleagues to new experiences oppertunites, and of course to show absolute determination & to assist my colleagues with needs, and as most importantly, be professional, and upkeep a good posture on the job. With all that being said, I believe bringing this role to the council will be a good choice to keep in mind.



 

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I personally have served in Alpha-1 for quite some time, and through out that time, I was able to show patience, and being able to work under pressure. Alpha-1 is the MTF in closest contact with the O5 Council, seeing the little things of what the O5 Council does. My vast experience in MTF E-11 has also proved beneficial, teaching me to keep eyes all around me, staying on high alert during breaches, working harmoniously together, to secure the area, and getting personnel to safety during extensive breaches.


 

  Hide contents

I believe that I am a mature individual, taking my staff position as an example, I have shown the ability to work under pressure and keeping the things running smoothly, this paid off beautifully as I have shown my ability to be working as Site Administration. Administrative personnel are to be taken seriously, take The Site Director, I've served as Site Director for a high period of time, learning to give out orders, and maintaining harmony through the site. I've recently joined the Ethics Committee, seeing an entire new view of an administrative member, I've learned surprisingly at a high speed and I believe I've shown my abilities and predilection on the field and roles as of such, and I believe I can bring a new perspective to the O5 Council. 


Can you explain what an O5 does for the foundation and the site itself and why he himself differs from any other site Adminstration?: 
The O5 Council are the highest ranking foundation personnel on the site/ the owners of the Foundation thus makes them differ from other Site Administration;

Other Site-Administration sometimes attend or notify the personnel if they have arrived on-site, I've seen this happen a few times with a simple "SD on-site" or "ECM on-site." Preferably an O5 Council Member, would choose to stay unidentified, and not notify anyone of their presence to prevent any bad event from happening. -  The CL2 personnel are unaware of their existance, and The Council would like to keep it that way.

What may differ too, are the secretive MTF Operatives that follow the Council Members, and provide them with a layer of protection with their Assault Rifles and absolute dedication to protecting the Council.
Who may this be?: MTF Alpha-1.

Mobile Task Force Alpha-1, appropriately nicknamed the Red Right Hand, are the protectors and guardians of the Notorious and inaccessible O5 Council. These are the best of the best, handpicked for both skill and absolute loyalty to the Council. They work with an extra layer of secrecy and accept their orders directly from O5. Seemingly the O5 Council are able to grant any sort of request at their will, but they will mostly deny requests depending what this could be.


--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
What is the O5 Council?
The O5 Council, are the highest members and top leaders in the Foundation. It consists of 12 Council Members and sometimes an additional member to break up ties in votes. The members of the Council have to work together to make the right decision at the right time. Varying from money and budgets, to certain projects that are active within the site, and overseeing the foundation and the staff that are located within. Most members don't do the everyday thankless tasks of course they give orders down the Chain of Command to the simple researcher and security guard. They too have limits though from a higher power that they and a spare few others know of.

 Like a lot of secret organizations, the Foundation goes to great lenghts to make sure their forbidden knowledge remains secret, that's why low level junior researchers, guards, and janitorial staff aren't privy to where all the bodies are buried - both literally and metaphorically speaking. The O5 are a group of 12 or 13people, usually named "The Overseers" or "The Overwatch" etc.

The Foundation has five levels of security clearance, and the O5 Council and their select staff are the only ones who are at Security Level 5 - also known as "Thaumiel Clearance." O5 Council members are also considered Class-A Foundation Staff; meaning they are of critical value to the operations of the Foundation.

As such, they're not permited to interact with any anomalies for fear, corruption, alteration or death. Though of course seeing as they're the most powerful people in the Foundation, they don't always follow their own rules on this one. In the event of an emergency their evacuation and transportation to a designated Safe Zone becomes a top priority to all Foundation underlings. They rarley, if ever, interact with the majority of the Foundation instead favoring to use a vast network of messengers and go-betweens for security purposes. 
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________________________________________________________________________________________

Are you currently head of a department (Job Manager), general staff in Nu-7 or a Site Director?:
I am currently serving as a Site Director.

What Departement would you like to focus on? (Research, Mobile Task Forces, Ethics,...):
I personally wouldn't mind any, yet we could discuss this; Ethics is one of my ideas.


Thank you for reading.
I will appreciate honest and serious feedback, that will be amazing.
(Any changes or little "hard-to-read" parts you want to see feel free to notify me.)

- Kaneki Frost
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I would add a number

4 hours ago, Kaneki Frost said:
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Amazing... let's attempt again shall I.
____________________________________________________________________________________
Your in-Game Name:

Kaneki Frost

Your SteamID:


 STEAM_0:1:229303029

Your Age:

15 years of age. 
(Nearing 16.)

Your In-Game Playtime:

7 weeks and 4 days. Counting.

Your Warns: 

Metagaming, job abuse and revenge RDM. (In one warning.)

 

Rate Your RP Skills:

 8/10.
(I have given myself this number due to me actually being able to RP, but on the server you may or may not notice due to my open funloving and sociable personality.)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 

 

What O5 Designation would you prefer (1-12) and what character?: 

"The Constant" -
" Male, British Decent. Appears young, but their age is mid 50's.
^ Varies appearances, but always appears in a Suit.
Speaks Calmly, and is mostly a nice individual.
(Former Ethics Committee Member.)

Have you read and understand the rules of SCP-RP?: Due to being Staff, I am aware of the current server rules. So Yes.

Why do you believe you should be part of the O5 Council and what can you bring to the role e.g (Pressure in extreme situations, making the tough decisions):
 

-snip-

tdlr of that 3000 word block: I am calm, will not shoot everyone on sight, and will be professional.

I'd probably re-write it as it was really long and repetitive and you didn't even answer the question unless what I mentioned before was all you can offer.

Ignore the word limit and really write down what you want to do with the role, be specific, list off what you think you can provide to the role, we already know that you'll be professional and all the other basic things you should already have, so just focus on what you'll be doing as an O5.

5 hours ago, Kaneki Frost said:
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Can you explain what an O5 does for the foundation and the site itself and why he himself differs from any other site Adminstration?: 
-snip-


--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
What is the O5 Council?
The O5 Council, are the highest members and top leaders in the Foundation. It consists of 12 Council Members and sometimes an additional member to break up ties in votes. The members of the Council have to work together to make the right decision at the right time. Varying from money and budgets, to certain projects that are active within the site, and overseeing the foundation and the staff that are located within. Most members don't do the everyday thankless tasks of course they give orders down the Chain of Command to the simple researcher and security guard. They too have limits though from a higher power that they and a spare few others know of.

 Like a lot of secret organizations, the Foundation goes to great lenghts to make sure their forbidden knowledge remains secret, that's why low level junior researchers, guards, and janitorial staff aren't privy to where all the bodies are buried - both literally and metaphorically speaking. The O5 are a group of 12 or 13people, usually named "The Overseers" or "The Overwatch" etc.

The Foundation has five levels of security clearance, and the O5 Council and their select staff are the only ones who are at Security Level 5 - also known as "Thaumiel Clearance." O5 Council members are also considered Class-A Foundation Staff; meaning they are of critical value to the operations of the Foundation.

As such, they're not permited to interact with any anomalies for fear, corruption, alteration or death. Though of course seeing as they're the most powerful people in the Foundation, they don't always follow their own rules on this one. In the event of an emergency their evacuation and transportation to a designated Safe Zone becomes a top priority to all Foundation underlings. They rarley, if ever, interact with the majority of the Foundation instead favoring to use a vast network of messengers and go-betweens for security purposes. 
-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

 

________________________________________________________________________________________

Are you currently head of a department (Job Manager), general staff in Nu-7 or a Site Director?:
I am currently serving as a Site Director.

What Departement would you like to focus on? (Research, Mobile Task Forces, Ethics,...):
I personally wouldn't mind any, yet we could discuss this; Ethics is one of my ideas.


Thank you for reading.
I will appreciate honest and serious feedback, that will be amazing.
(Any changes or little "hard-to-read" parts you want to see feel free to notify me.)

- Kaneki Frost
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You didn't answer the question besides for explaining they act undercover, half of this is literally explaining Alpha-1.

5 hours ago, Kaneki Frost said:
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Amazing... let's attempt again shall I.
____________________________________________________________________________________
Your in-Game Name:

Kaneki Frost

Your SteamID:


 STEAM_0:1:229303029

Your Age:

15 years of age. 
(Nearing 16.)

Your In-Game Playtime:

7 weeks and 4 days. Counting.

Your Warns: 

Metagaming, job abuse and revenge RDM. (In one warning.)

 

Rate Your RP Skills:

 8/10.
(I have given myself this number due to me actually being able to RP, but on the server you may or may not notice due to my open funloving and sociable personality.)
_______________________________________________________________________________ 

 

What O5 Designation would you prefer (1-12) and what character?: 

"The Constant" -
" Male, British Decent. Appears young, but their age is mid 50's.
^ Varies appearances, but always appears in a Suit.
Speaks Calmly, and is mostly a nice individual.
(Former Ethics Committee Member.)

Have you read and understand the rules of SCP-RP?: Due to being Staff, I am aware of the current server rules. So Yes.

---------------------------------------
Why do you believe you should be part of the O5 Council and what can you bring to the role e.g (Pressure in extreme situations, making the tough decisions):
 I highly believe that I am an encouraged individual, and able to come up with greater and brighter ideas for the Council, it can allow me to have conversations with other fellow Council Members, and see their sides of certain stories, and or situations. I see that the Council can be serious at the time, and I believe a friendly, serious and dedicated member would bring stability and diversity and variety to the Council, which will be favourable.

Working under pressure and staying calm is ideal for an O5 Council Member. I believe bringing a new role to the Council will be pleasing to have. And I believe I will be able to serve. All O5 Council Members personally all have their own judgement on their own things, one may get angry and shoot, yet another may lock them up. The new role I wish to bring is patience, calmness and determination. Of course there are many more reasons, but I believe bring a diverse member of the Council will be exactly right for the council, to open a new mindset for them, and making things go way one way or another, either with violence, or ethically.

Regarding all this, let's go back to the main question: I wish to bring a new experience and a new fresh role to the Group, making disscussions with council colleagues and able to come to the answer of certain questions much faster and efficiently, open a new mindset for myself and my colleagues to new experiences oppertunites, and of course to show absolute determination & to assist my colleagues with needs, and as most importantly, be professional, and upkeep a good posture on the job. With all that being said, I believe bringing this role to the council will be a good choice to keep in mind.



 

  Hide contents

I personally have served in Alpha-1 for quite some time, and through out that time, I was able to show patience, and being able to work under pressure. Alpha-1 is the MTF in closest contact with the O5 Council, seeing the little things of what the O5 Council does. My vast experience in MTF E-11 has also proved beneficial, teaching me to keep eyes all around me, staying on high alert during breaches, working harmoniously together, to secure the area, and getting personnel to safety during extensive breaches.


 

  Hide contents

I believe that I am a mature individual, taking my staff position as an example, I have shown the ability to work under pressure and keeping the things running smoothly, this paid off beautifully as I have shown my ability to be working as Site Administration. Administrative personnel are to be taken seriously, take The Site Director, I've served as Site Director for a high period of time, learning to give out orders, and maintaining harmony through the site. I've recently joined the Ethics Committee, seeing an entire new view of an administrative member, I've learned surprisingly at a high speed and I believe I've shown my abilities and predilection on the field and roles as of such, and I believe I can bring a new perspective to the O5 Council. 


Can you explain what an O5 does for the foundation and the site itself and why he himself differs from any other site Adminstration?: 
The O5 Council are the highest ranking foundation personnel on the site/ the owners of the Foundation thus makes them differ from other Site Administration;

Other Site-Administration sometimes attend or notify the personnel if they have arrived on-site, I've seen this happen a few times with a simple "SD on-site" or "ECM on-site." Preferably an O5 Council Member, would choose to stay unidentified, and not notify anyone of their presence to prevent any bad event from happening. -  The CL2 personnel are unaware of their existance, and The Council would like to keep it that way.

What may differ too, are the secretive MTF Operatives that follow the Council Members, and provide them with a layer of protection with their Assault Rifles and absolute dedication to protecting the Council.
Who may this be?: MTF Alpha-1.

Mobile Task Force Alpha-1, appropriately nicknamed the Red Right Hand, are the protectors and guardians of the Notorious and inaccessible O5 Council. These are the best of the best, handpicked for both skill and absolute loyalty to the Council. They work with an extra layer of secrecy and accept their orders directly from O5. Seemingly the O5 Council are able to grant any sort of request at their will, but they will mostly deny requests depending what this could be.--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

What is the O5 Council?
-snip-

 

________________________________________________________________________________________

Are you currently head of a department (Job Manager), general staff in Nu-7 or a Site Director?:
I am currently serving as a Site Director.

What Departement would you like to focus on? (Research, Mobile Task Forces, Ethics,...):
I personally wouldn't mind any, yet we could discuss this; Ethics is one of my ideas.


Thank you for reading.
I will appreciate honest and serious feedback, that will be amazing.
(Any changes or little "hard-to-read" parts you want to see feel free to notify me.)

- Kaneki Frost
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First part is alright, rest is kinda of unnecessary filter words with repetition here and there.

I would read tales including overseers (Which there is alot) so you get a better idea as to who they really are, you should be mentioning as how they act day to day and what kind of personalities they got, like that O5s are mixed bag of "give no fucks" to "Nerd", that you can expect to see them on the frontlines of current large issues, sometimes literally.

We aren't really interested in that they have assistants, or how they evacuate....

 

 

 

Basically: Whole app needs a re-work as it kind of shows you haven't really got your mind wrapped around as to what you want to do with O5, which is fine, but you should figure it out pretty soon, even just a rough idea else you'll flop with the role.

There is something surely you want to do with it that you made you apply.

 

(Also, you can take my opinion with a grain of salt, I haven't been on for months and only am replying cause I like reading O5 apps, I don't know how you are in-game, which may outweigh a meh app.)

 

 

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Kvisten    539

Kvisten
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12 hours ago, Johnwickisblak said:

I would add a number

tdlr of that 3000 word block: I am calm, will not shoot everyone on sight, and will be professional.

I'd probably re-write it as it was really long and repetitive and you didn't even answer the question unless what I mentioned before was all you can offer.

Ignore the word limit and really write down what you want to do with the role, be specific, list off what you think you can provide to the role, we already know that you'll be professional and all the other basic things you should already have, so just focus on what you'll be doing as an O5.

You didn't answer the question besides for explaining they act undercover, half of this is literally explaining Alpha-1.

First part is alright, rest is kinda of unnecessary filter words with repetition here and there.

I would read tales including overseers (Which there is alot) so you get a better idea as to who they really are, you should be mentioning as how they act day to day and what kind of personalities they got, like that O5s are mixed bag of "give no fucks" to "Nerd", that you can expect to see them on the frontlines of current large issues, sometimes literally.

We aren't really interested in that they have assistants, or how they evacuate....

 

 

 

Basically: Whole app needs a re-work as it kind of shows you haven't really got your mind wrapped around as to what you want to do with O5, which is fine, but you should figure it out pretty soon, even just a rough idea else you'll flop with the role.

There is something surely you want to do with it that you made you apply.

 

(Also, you can take my opinion with a grain of salt, I haven't been on for months and only am replying cause I like reading O5 apps, I don't know how you are in-game, which may outweigh a meh app.)

 

 

Nigga, I thought you left the community entirely.

Anyways neutral.

 

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Henry    117

Henry
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12 hours ago, Johnwickisblak said:

I would add a number

tdlr of that 3000 word block: I am calm, will not shoot everyone on sight, and will be professional.

I'd probably re-write it as it was really long and repetitive and you didn't even answer the question unless what I mentioned before was all you can offer.

Ignore the word limit and really write down what you want to do with the role, be specific, list off what you think you can provide to the role, we already know that you'll be professional and all the other basic things you should already have, so just focus on what you'll be doing as an O5.

You didn't answer the question besides for explaining they act undercover, half of this is literally explaining Alpha-1.

First part is alright, rest is kinda of unnecessary filter words with repetition here and there.

I would read tales including overseers (Which there is alot) so you get a better idea as to who they really are, you should be mentioning as how they act day to day and what kind of personalities they got, like that O5s are mixed bag of "give no fucks" to "Nerd", that you can expect to see them on the frontlines of current large issues, sometimes literally.

We aren't really interested in that they have assistants, or how they evacuate....

 

 

 

Basically: Whole app needs a re-work as it kind of shows you haven't really got your mind wrapped around as to what you want to do with O5, which is fine, but you should figure it out pretty soon, even just a rough idea else you'll flop with the role.

There is something surely you want to do with it that you made you apply.

 

(Also, you can take my opinion with a grain of salt, I haven't been on for months and only am replying cause I like reading O5 apps, I don't know how you are in-game, which may outweigh a meh app.)

 

 

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Taurus Tremani    95

Taurus Tremani
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+1 Frosty Frost

Current Ranks: 

MTF A-1 Agent | CI Reserve Manager | MTF E-11 Agent | HoEA | SCP Staff

Past Ranks:

SCP Moderator | MTF E-11 Commander | UIU Agent | CI Delta | HoEA  | MC&D Salesman |  Nu-7 SGT | GM SOF Colonel | Medic  x2  | 501st SOF Colonel

 

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