I feel like you'd be an okay O5 but talking back like that isn't a good idea.
What you should have just done is elaborated on what you mean in the "Why would you like to be an O5" section.
Also, @Zalitrot , When rating applications you need to elaborate on why on earth you are giving said rating, I don't think the reason you stated in your -1 is reasonable.
I don't think you should talk back, and even if you do you might want to try do it in a reasonable way.
I will keep this as a +1 just like with your previous application.
Good luck and best wishes
-O5-8 "The Terse"