Denied Owl's Jedi EP application

[Owl 1]

Steam Name + Profile link: Owl https://steamcommunity.com/id/owl-nl/

Roleplay Name (e.g. GM TRP Johan / Jedi Padawan Ngannou): GM CPL Owl, Jedi Master Owl

Teamspeak Name: Owl

Playtime on the Server: 1mo 3w 2d 21h 31m

SteamID (http://steamidfinder.com/): STEAM_0:1:85474696

Any experience in staffing on a roleplay server: No

Current Age: 23

Warns/Bans: https://imgur.com/a/zBNZ2xH

Do you have a working microphone and is it understandable?: Yes and it's understandable.

Have you ever Done an Event Before?: No

What was your event and was it successfully executed?: N/A

Do you understand the responsibilities an event-planner has? If so, what are they?: You are to remain professional and not to react to petty squabbles. 

Do you understand at the beginning of passing the application stage, you will have to undergo a training phase until completely trusted to create and host events?: Yes

Clone Event Plan:

Create an event plan for clones, Event announcement, What type of enemies will be encountered. Keep in mind this will be used for your first training event. Make it easy to understand, be original and be creative(Use the Template):
 

Story for your event:

There will be a holo message left for the leading battalion and he needs to call all commanding officers from each regiment to deck 3 to view the message about the desperate civilians. The civilian leader will explain that they have in dire need of help from the republic to get rid of the cartel occupation. After the holo message ends the leading battalion will give every regiment a task to execute for the planetary. The leading battalion will call everyone to the briefing room and tell them where the troops that they are going to mos mesric and get rid of the cartel occupation.

Event Announcement for your story:

The civilians of mos mesric are in need of help from the republic to get rid of the cartel occupation on their city.

Choice of map:
 rp_mos_mesric_v2

Type of enemies/faction, Why them in particular?: Cartel, because they want to seek domination over mos mesric
(eg. Pirates, Reason, )

Additional Characters: Cartel Leader (he is gonna negotiate with SF)
(eg. passive character)

Republic's outline and execution: The Leading Battalion informs all troops that the cartel took civilians hostage in mos mesric and the cartel is willing to negotiate.
(e.g. "- Battalion inform all troops that an unknown ship has entered orbit.")

Event Character outline and execution: All cartel members are being dropped off in the town of mos mesric , follow the cartel leader and wait until further orders.
(e.g. "- All Bounty Hunters are dropped off at the caves, they will stay there until further notice")

Jedi Event Plan:

Create a jedi event BASED upon one of the following P-EC scenario below 

- Grey Jedi Teidowan who prevented the Jedi order from stopping the genocide of a village. The Grey Jedi now must be redeemed by the jedi order. Write an event plan on how the Grey Jedi would be redeemed

- Sith Apprentice who seeks to resurrect its master with a dark ritual after he was slain by the jedi. The ritual required sacrifices of multiple lifeforms. Write a event plan on how the Sith could perform said ritual

- Mercenary Guerilla wanted by the republic for multiple murderers has been hired by a wealthy client. After a high ranking jedi within the order captured the wealthy client previously, now he is hungry for revenge. Write an event plan so that the Mercenary can kidnap the high ranking Jedi

Story for your event BASED on the option:
The sith apprentice is gonna lure the jedi into a trap (likely a dupe outside of the JT) and kill them so that his master may rise again, the jedi have a option to stop the ritual by meditating (at least 4 jedi must be meditating) near the ritual statue and channel the light side of the force into the statue so the master can't rise from his slumber. If the sith apprentice manages to kill at least 4 jedi before the jedi stop the ritual the master will rise from his eternal slumber and help out the sith apprentice fight the jedi. After that the only way to stop the sith apprentice and master is to kill both of them before they have a chance to escape the planet.

Event Announcement for your story:

A stranger seeks to resurrects his former master using a dark ritual, are the jedi able to stop his master's resurrection
Additional Characters: Sith Darth (if resurrected successfully)
(eg. passive char or burner EC)

Jedi's outline and execution: The Jedi sense a disturbance in the force that there is something going on near scav camp. All Jedi head to that location and find the stranger waiting for them in the building.
(e.g. "- Jedi finds a camp of slaughtered civilians  .")

Jedi Event Character outline and execution: The sith apprentice hyperspaces into the planet (done in /advert RP) to resurrect his former master. The sith waits inside the dupe for the jedi to arrive.
(e.g. "- Sith has sent an emissary to lure the jedi into an ambush")

Last question: N/A

Anything else?: W-G E-Planner

[sandy.tm 125]

Positives:
High rank nice guy

Negatives:
THe clone event isint explained well and you dont have any EC's HP and guns and jobs explanation The jedi event seems basic and mos mesric is not a good map.

Neutral/-1

[⚡Flash⚡ 24]

-1
 

With you being a high rank in Jedi id expect something other than a PEC event for a Jedi event.
There is no Clone event, hps, weapons, or ec ammount nothing.

You are a High Ranking Jedi player and have been SO many times on clone id expect more.

[Benny 30]

Neutral 

- Dedicated and passionate about what he does
- Been a good EC multiple times in my events and knows some decent amount of lore
- I believe Owl would be a quick learner

- Very short event plan for both jedi and clone, missing out on a lot of detail
- Should look into how detailed other applications are and expand on your ideas
 

[Mr Jeff 13]

-1

You joined the EC channel mid event to complain and when told to please leave and send him a message/poke about the issue you proceeded to chat mad shit about him about being corrupt and how you didn't want to work under him.

Chief Alchemist Shaak Ti

[Meledits1 11]

-1/Neutral

- High Ranking and Nice Guy and all "at times" but can be a dick (honest feedback)
- Basic Jedi Event, For someone who complains about Jedi Events being boring and basic, this is very basic.

- No Clone Event, The Clone is event section is required to be filled out even IF you are going for Jedi EP

- No HP amounts or lives or anything to insight the length of the event (the event could be to short or long depending on health and lives)

Overall a -1 from me but I'm wishing you best of luck owl.

[Taurus Tremani 95]

Neutral

I know you've had some decently high ranks before and you are a experienced player but I don't really know you. From the times I've talked to you you seem like a nice guy but the Clone event is lacking in explanation for my taste. 

tbh, I don't see a compelling reason to pick you for EP but also to deny you, therefor NEUTRAL

[Rex [W-G] 49]

+1/Neutral

Good event idea for jedi i love PEC 

Nice guy never been a dick towards me

Seem you would like to be a Jedi EP which is good we need more of them

 

Clone event idea is poor but it can be improved on which u can do while in EP as JEP
 

Can just speak with currect clone ep and ask for ideas and help yourself to improve the clone event outside of the app

Good luck lad

[Rorybanevojske 13]

Neutral / -1

Nice guy 

Decent High Rank In Jedi

Clone Event is not well planned

Openly Complained to Comments about Jedi EP In TS.

Recently Arrested for False AOS

[Eduard 6]

Neutral

Great lad

High rank in jedi

Clone event could be more developed

Jedi event can be better planned and explained in longer detail taking into account that you are aiming for Jedi EP

 

Good Luck anyway Owl

[Vandori 6]

DENIED
Unfortunately Event Management have decided to deny your application. 
You can reapply in 2 weeks if applications are open.