Breatoking

+1 You have been in CE for a long time and I remember your assent up the ranks. I haven't seen your leadership skills, but that doesn't mean they aren't there. You quick reactions and your tactical ability in the air are amazing and honestly its great to see. You have also been Trial and temp EXO so you must be trust worthy enough to be given that power so honestly I would have no issues with you getting it. Good luck.

Neutral I mean I supervise you, and have known you a very long time so I believe I can give the best round up. Your leadership, commitment and dedication is amazing. Beyond anyone else's I have seen. I guess the only one who matches you with it would be Seoul, but I have to agree with other battalion members. 2 weeks 4 days is so, unbelievably small, AND YOU ARE THE 2ND LONGEST SO IN 501ST. It just scares me and others that you will be a unlucky 2.0. Good luck

-1 Honestly you would be an amazing person to have in battalion but lets be real. DU need you, and with the hierarchy changing almost weekly, they need a stable leadership figure. I don't blame you in some ways for wanting to leave but maybe ensure DU is stable and there will be people able to take your place before leaving it. Good luck

+1 Finally. Personally I believe you would be a great fit for battalion. Your dedication is amazing and should be applauded. Aswell your leadership skills have been shown off countless times and that is what battalion are looking more off. Dont worry about the playtime, because in this short amount of time , you have shown yourself in a good light.

-1 I mean it took you, I believe 12 attempts to get past SO training which is... Well its a first. Second the point that you have to defend your actions for a mingy act doesn't put you in a good light. Maybe mature abit then think about battalion

Neutral Active High ranks in the past Very young Good luck

Neutral You're a commander and not a bad one in the slightest. You show great care and are very good at leading but also listening which is key for battalion My only issue is DU. You are leaving at such a important and issue filled time and I think joined battalion when DU is so volatile is a bad thing to do. It makes you like as if you dont give a shit. Overall I wouldn't mind you in battalion but you need to think, if you leave will DU struggle because you were selfish?

Neutral Good guy Very active and knowledgeable Take things to much to heart Very quiet and not a strong leader verbally

-1 Very toxic Can not take any type of criticism well Good thing is 212th members like you

+1 Very pog Done this more times then many people knows what to do Only issue is that you are slightly immature and you have been warned 2 times recently

-1 Better options You left 212th because you were bored You stating about a "minge squad" doesnt paint you in a good light

+1 Very pog Good in Jedi and Clone Alittle mingy in the past but meh

Basic Information: Steam Name + Profile link: Breatoking / https://steamcommunity.com/id/breatoking/ Roleplay Name: Battalion Major Breatoking Teamspeak Name: Breatoking Playtime on the Server: 12 weeks 3 days SteamID (http://steamidfinder.com/ STEAM_0:1:106144260 Any experience in staffing: Not on Garry’s mod servers but I understand the basic principles Current Age: 17 Warns/Bans: N/A Do you have a working microphone and is it understandable?: Yes I do Event Plan: Create an event plan, this is what we will use for your first training event. Make it easy to understand and original(Use the Template): Map: rp_vanqor_sbs Enemies, HP, Amount: CIS B1 Battle Droid, Base HP, 10 of them CIS Commando Droid, Base HP, 2-4 of them CIS Sniper Droid, Base HP, Dependant on how many GC but at max 2. CIS droid Pilot, Base HP, 1-2 of them and only bring in once the republic have claimed the FOB Passive, HP, Amount: Clone Trooper, 1000 HP, 1 Republic's Execution: The event will start with the republic landing on Vanqor. Once the briefing is done, they will do a full assault on the FOB and try to claim it as theirs. The battalion in command should use RC, GC and GM to open the gate. Once it is open all the frontline forces (e.g 501st, 212th, 327th and CT) should be instructed to push in and take the facility. Once they do they should find a wounded CT trooper in the back of the control room. He will explain that he is the only survivor and that the CIS are stationed on this planet in a bunker. He will also say that it is ray shielded. He will then explain that in the caves, behind the crashed venator, there is a control board which, if destroyed, can bring the shields down, along with the blast doors into the hanger section. With this information being finished the CT should begin to cough and begin to die. 74th should try to save him and take him to the medbay to recover. The battalion in command should then order frontline regiments to the caves. CE should also begin transport at this time. To and from the spawn to the FOB. At this time, the CIS fleet get a hint of what is going on and bring their fleet out of orbit and begin to send in vultures/Hyena bombers to begin an attack on the ground forces. Once the frontlines arrive at the caves, they should push in heavily and after brief struggles, they should enter the first room. In the entrance there is a console that either CE or RC have to hack. Once it is down the blast doors and ray shield should be taken down. The commanding Battalion should then order an attack on the bunker and claim it for themselves. After this is over the planet should be in the republics hand and all droids should be wiped out. When the battalion orders a defcon 4 and it is clear, they will be extracted to their next base, rather than doing a debrief on the planet Event Character Execution: In the beginning the droids will prepare to hold the FOB from the republic. They will try to stop the MG and once they fail to do that their mission is to stop them from entering the FOB. Once they fail to do that it should be in their best interest to try to go inside buildings and fight in the close quarters. After this they will respawn at the caves and, again, prepare to hold out at the caves. Once the CIS fleet has entered orbit, the selected pilots will get switched and then be put onto a dreadnought. As the frontlines push forward to the caves, the pilot droids begin attacking the FOB with bombers and when CE get into the air. Vultures should be used to begin dog fighting. If CE takes too long to get into the air, Hyena bombers should begin doing bombing runs on the frontline forces, to force their hand to act quicker. Once the frontlines set up outside of the caves, it should be a defensive dream. They just need to hold the line and don't push out too far. If the hold gets too bad and clones can not push, the commando’s should be changed to B1 and their spawn should be put further back, until the push is successful. Once the droids lose the terminal they are to station on the outside of the bunker and prepare to hold the, now open, blast doors. As the frontlines keep pushing the droids, deeper and deeper into the ground, the last hold should be a communication relay in the cave section to the bunker. Once the clones have pushed to there it should be the last life and once they are all dead it finishes. The CIS fleet should also leave at this time so the pilots should go on last life once the republic gets outside the cave system. Story: Event Information: So the event is based around the crashed venator on the map. It's a crashed venator from a battle which happened shortly before our forces got there. Once they crash and scramble to make a FOB, they send a distress signal out for anyone in the area to help, and ofcourse we take the call and go help. It's a very basic planetary but it adds different things to it. We go just to extract and leave but we then go on a full battle to reclaim the entire planet and instead of just finding that out from random things, it comes from someone who has lived through the crash and the loss of the FOB. The battle itself I made to be more dynamic. The ground forces are very much the same but the space battle is more to give CE something to do and add another aspect to the fight, the commanding Battalion needs to focus on Have you ever Done an Event Before?: No I have not. What was your event and was it successfully executed?: N/A Do you understand the responsibilities an event-planner has? If so, what are they?: An Event planners first responsibility is to make fun, enjoyable events. Making them interesting, enjoyable and involving as many people as they can. It's also their job to make the events new, original and making new, and inventive stories. In terms of staff roles, they are to act just like one, in terms of maturity and being sensible in their actions. If there are no staff online or if they are unavailable they should take claims and try to help as much as they can and if a staff member comes online, they should step away and let them handle it. Do you understand at the beginning of passing the application stage, you will have to undergo a training phase until completely trusted to create and host events?: Yes. I mean it makes sense and it's logical. Anything else?: W-G E-Planner P.S: I didn't make a Jedi event because I'm not sure I could give a great event for them. If there was a Jedi event, I would just put Sith in, where we were trying to take some crystals or something, deeper into the caves and have them die while trying to leave with the crystals.

+1 Personally I think you would be a great fit for battalion. Strong leader from the ARC evals and reaching VC is no easy feet so it shows you are at least understanding of what you must do in a high position. My only issue would be your understanding of frontline assaults. Coming from DU, you understand the defensive side, but I havent seen you work with other regiments. My suggestion is gain some knowledge from 501st, 212th or 327th by taking part in a training or two. Good luck

+1 Been 74th ARC in the past so yeah your not stupid in terms of what battalion need. You have also worked with most regiments so you are knowledgeable about what to do in combat with each regiment. Dont be stinky and dont say naught words around Barry Good Luck

Neutral Okay at sorting CT's out and able to be competent. Missing 67 words in your summary and you seem to have a hatred towards me which doesn't set a good example. Good luck

+1/Neutral So well done for making an application. I personally loved to read it. Firstly your rank in DU is to be commended. Not easy being in a regiment which has had issues in the past and seeming that you have stayed and worked through them is a large thing and shows a lot about who you are. I also see you as a leader figure in DU, which coming from me is very respectable so hold your head high. My negatives are short. To some people you can be a no body. I didn't know who you were, when I was in 501st. Only being in battalion and having good talks with you can I say the good things about you. Another issue I see is that you are very closed in how you are in DU. You only speak to DU and don't try to branch off and work with other frontline regiments in trainings. That would be my other things really bad. Overall I would not have an issue if you joined battalion. Just make sure to keep your head up if you don't get it. Good luck, -Connor/Breatoking

Neutral/-1 I mean lets just get straight into it. Coming from someone who has made, and I mean I have made huge ones. You need to accept and improve on it, don't disregard what people say because as a battalion you will get alot of people telling you that you are doing something wrong. It is important to take the feedback and improve from it. Another issue is I almost have 0 clue who you are. I mean I know you are 212th but thats all I know really. Try to be more known outside of your regiment. Overall well done. The application is good but improve on what people tell you and try to accept criticism in a good way, rather then fighting back. Sometimes its good just to nod and move on. Good luck, -Connor/Breatoking

-1 Honestly lets just get into it. Your inactive. Your past experiences in GM, may sway people to +1 it but being blacklisted from RC and ARC is bad. The only way I can see you getting battalion is doing this: -Improve activity, Grow up a little, work on your relationship with RC and admit the faults you made and lastly work with other regiments to understand how they function. Good luck, Seriously -Connor/Breatoking

Neutral So as a 501st member you have proven yourself, not just to your hierarchy, but to me as well that you are a great asset. You know exactly what you are doing and always preform to an amazing standard. I should also say that you got to master in Jedi and that isn't an easy feet so well done. My negative is this though. You haven't been Major in a long time. Its change a lot since then and maybe you might need a small refresher on what is needed. I should also say you don't have the same commitment s other applications, e.g. Archer has been trying and working harder. I would also suggest working with DU to learn what the backlines have to do to become a better and stronger leader. Overall I wouldnt have an issue with you in battalion just work on those small things and prove to me that you are ready for this title. Good luck, -Connor/Breatoking

-1 Overall good application. Nothing stands out to much however but it was very well formulated and you should be proud. Another thing to say is well done with reaching Major. SO isn't an easy rank to reach, so being able to do so is amazing. Unfortunately there are a few flaws. Firstly you are very new. Not at all a bad thing but people don't know you. I could not really say anything which is a bad thing. Next you have just reach Major. My suggestion is stay in the regiment and learn a little more about leadership and what the battlefield is like before becoming battalion. I should also say, try to work with other regiments. You only have one slice of what everyone does. Try to join a DU training and then maybe either a 501st, 212th or 327th training to learn what its like in a different role. Overall do not be upset. You have done really well and I congratulate you. Just work on what else you can learn before trying again Good luck, -Connor/Breatoking

+1 Very happy to see another application from you. Honestly with 3 applications we can only hope you get it. You are committed to getting this, shown by the amount of applications you have made. It also shows by reaching CE Colonel. I would also say you are very trust worthy by being CE temp EXO on I believe more than a few occasions. Only thing I would say is work with a backline regiment to understand what they do in combat. You have worked with 501st and other frontlines before so well done for taking the initiative to do so. You are young, and as Kids said, it can lead to being slightly immature but I wouldn't worry to much. Many successful battalion in the past have been young. An example would be Grabs. Overall I hope you get it this time and if not, keep your head up. You are doing well and keep going Good luck -Connor/Breatoking

+1 I am surprised that you decided to go for battalion, but do not take that in a bad way. I am glad that you have decided to apply. I could be here and list off every good thing about you but I dont have the time to write them all so here are some basic ones. Leadership, shown by being an EXO in CE. Your willingness to make friends outside your regiment and lastly you are just an awesome guy to be around. My only issue is your activity at times. It is a little hit or miss at times and sometimes I dont see you as much as I would like but honestly it is only a small thing. Another thing would maybe work with other frontline regiments in trainings but you do understand what most regiments do anyway by being an EP so its only a small thing. Overall good job. Proud and hope you get it. Good luck, -Connor/Breatoking

Neutral/-1 Lets begin with the positives. You, unlike any other applications, have been apart of 2 regiments. Now this isn't what sets you out however. The thing I will focus on is that you have been apart of a support regiment (74th) and a frontline regiment (501st). Personally that is exactly what battalion need. You understand what every person needs to do to make a push successful and with you being 74th Trial EXO, it sets you out and you should be applauded for that. Your negatives however show very prominently. Firstly I have seen that you have made a lot of edits to your application on what people have said. Though it is good, that you have seen the wrongs you have made in the application, this doesn't truly show who YOU are. Another issue I see popping up is about your rank. I will grant that you are not Major in 501st, you were 74th SO for such a long time so honestly that argument seems stupid and should be disregarded. My only other issue is your application itself. You have expressed to me that you have this system, and how it can be flawed, it works. There are things wrong with your application and though they have been fixed, they were messed up and should remain such. Overall I think your want to join battalion is great, but I think you need to sit down and truly think about what you want to do in battalion. My suggestion is stay in 501st. Learn more and try become a more prominent person, in leadership and ability. Goodluck, -Connor/Breatoking

+1 Without a question, one of the best picks for this position. Your rank in 327th alone sets you out as a good candidate, seeming as not many people will achieve the rank of EXO. Another thing is being a member of ARC. Being an 327th ARC, you know what it takes for frontlines to succeed and working with RC in the past allows you to have more knowledge then other people who have applied. I do have a few things to mention however. Firstly, as far as I am aware, 327th has been your regiment and you haven't really gone away from it. I will grant that you have been in 501st and have joined in with trainings but that is more frontline training. I would suggest working with a midline or support regiment to fully understand what they have to go through to make yourself a better and more strong leader in the eyes of everyone. Overall good work. In my eyes, you would be a perfect candidate for battalion. Just work on those small things and you will be perfect. Good luck, -Connor/Breatoking